Thursday, March 14, 2013

Superficial Worlds (Theme)


Have you ever read a book or watched a movie, and the further in you got, the less you trusted the narrator? But did you ever think, that may be they were telling the truth, and that is what they saw, but they were the ones being lied to, they were in a counterfeit world that was staged around them?

There are plenty of books and movies where everything just seems a little… off: The Maze Runner trilogy, The Matrix, The Giver, and so many more. These all take place in superficial worlds that are either built around the main character and their friends, or around a community of people, and the main character wants to break free of these binds.

Each main character of The Maze Runner trilogy, The Matrix, and The Giver, all figure out at one point or another, that the world is false, and so is almost everything they see, feel, and hear. As they strive to break free of the binds of their fake reality, either they realize that the real world is just as bad as the fake one, the evil things they encounter break free along with them, or as they break free of one, they are pulled into another and have to break free all over again.

In The Maze Runner Trilogy, the main characters break free- or at least they think they break free, but are then sent to the real world, which doubles as a fake reality, and are required to travel across the treacherous landscape full of insane people trying to kill them. After that, they are then pulled into the real world, but they figure out that it is not as nice as they thought, and are nearly killed several times, but in the end, they survive, but with some losses.

In The Matrix, the world itself is a dream, and the main character needs to wake up. However, when he does, the evil entities follow him out to the real world, and he has to purge the world of them.

In The Giver, the main character discovers some disturbing things that his “community” does. His community frowns upon anybody being different or better than anyone else. At first it sounds efficient, but then he slowly starts to realize  that the community isn’t the only place to go, and in the end he escapes with a little boy, and ends in a way you’ll have to read for yourself.

So, in the end, almost all superficial worlds end well enough, but may have some sort of a tragic ending, that leaves something, or someone behind.

Wednesday, March 13, 2013

Zombie Story

Author's Note: Hey people, I need some help. Now, I have been debating whether or not to write a zombie story, and I have been back and forth, but I can't decide, thus why I need your help. For anyone who likes zombie stories, I need your advice. Here is the prologue to my story, and if anybody thinks I should or shouldn't continue it, please comment on it, and if there is anything you think I should change, also comment it, and I will take it into consideration. Thank you!
(P.S. I won't always change what you think I should.)



Prologue

Spring
Bank

“Oh… you’re right. I should have told you.”
“It’s too late now,” he replied.
“But-“
“No! He’s gone now, there ain’t nothin we can do,” he stated, cutting her off.
“I’m sorry Jack, I thought you were okay alone,” she said to the decayed corpse lying on the ground in front of them. It started to move, and he quickly put a bullet in its head.
“We gotta get outta here before more of ’em arrive, you know what happens when they howl,” James said, gesturing to all of the dead corpses on the ground, each one with at least one bullet hole in the skull.
“Okay, “ Maya replied with a little sob.
“I know he was our son, but it’s the Thaw, and there are bound to be more comin soon,” James quickly stated, suddenly in a hurry looking out the glass doors.
As she turns to look, she asks “What’s wro-“
She was cut off by the sound of breaking glass and moans from the double doors.
“Too late, here they come!” he shouted to her, as swarms started flowing in.
 The only thing to be heard were the moans of the infected, and gunfire.

After several hours, the gunfire stopped but the hordes were still flowing in, and the horrid screams of the undead continued.
In the dismal night from bird’s eye, two figures were seen fleeing from the bank, and into the night.