Release
What would you do if people in your city were getting killed just for being different? Well, when that happens in The Giver, it is called Release. I think that the idea of Release is just revolting.
I think that it is revolting because it is just killing someone for a really dumb reason. Release is when they eject a type of liquid into a person, and then the liquid kills them. I think that it is bad because just because someone is different or has problems, they still deserve to live, not to get killed. If people around me were getting killed just because they were different, I would probably take everyone I love and take some food and some other supplies and run away with them and never go back or look back.
I think that if there was a city like that, no one would want to live there. I know I wouldn’t.
I enjoyed your word choice, but I think that the essay itself is a little bit simplistic. Good job though, nice work.
ReplyDeleteIt had a good point but you used two consecutive adjectives in revolting. Good opinion
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